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ALIEN by ~Acheronscrow:iconAcheronscrow:

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Submitted: May 4
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Make: EASTMAN KODAK COMPANY
Model: KODAK DC3400 ZOOM DIGITAL CAMERA
Shutter Speed: 1/128 second
F Number: F/5.6
Focal Length: 6 mm
Date Picture Taken: Apr 26, 2000, 10:02:14 AM

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*VixRayne:iconVixRayne: May 4, 2008, 3:49:40 PM
Very interesting concept.

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~Your fears are mine then we are afraid together...~~~
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Please visit me and stay for a bit [link]
~farthestfamine:iconfarthestfamine: May 5, 2008, 4:10:03 PM
Man, you can describe things better than anyone, it's just so enjoying to read. The only part i didn't like was the phrase "screams will echo into eternity" or some shit, it's not original, i've used it previous and i've probably stolen it from someone hehe. I love the picture of blood flowing down the cathedral windows. I love the question at the end, because i believe our ignorance dilutes us and that you are hinting at that.Perhaps we should be fearing ourselves. Something like that, anyways, fun read, it's like giving a kid who got 99% on a test the full ace, because it was just so enjoyable.
~Acheronscrow:iconAcheronscrow: May 5, 2008, 4:50:44 PM
I can't thank you enough; you always give honest and helpful feedback, which is what I need. I'm so glad you enjoyed the read... I tend to agree with you about that phrase you highlighted, I'll fix that as I want to make this poem a good one! Yes the question at the end is very real. I'll have more to share about such in future scribes.

Thanks :)

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"If a man had wings and bore black feathers, few of them would be clever enough to be crows."
--Henry Ward Beecher
~Acheronscrow:iconAcheronscrow: May 5, 2008, 4:51:30 PM
Thank you for commenting my friend :)

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"If a man had wings and bore black feathers, few of them would be clever enough to be crows."
--Henry Ward Beecher
=BlueCato:iconBlueCato: May 6, 2008, 1:11:38 AM
Hay, you’re watching too many movies, take a break, just kidding.

I think we have enough aliens of our own, heartless, without brains.

For one moment while reading the poem, I thought the young praying man, will find a way to get rid of the Aliens. Well I guess it will be another movie or a never ending story.
~Acheronscrow:iconAcheronscrow: May 6, 2008, 4:43:07 PM
Ah yes, they are everywhere ;)

I'm afraid the young man succumbed to the fate that all other men will in this 'ongoing' story - death! hahaha

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"If a man had wings and bore black feathers, few of them would be clever enough to be crows."
--Henry Ward Beecher
=BlueCato:iconBlueCato: May 6, 2008, 9:48:03 PM
I hope your Aliens fear cats or at least do not eat them
~Killtastikk:iconKilltastikk: Jun 12, 2008, 10:11:07 AM
Sweet that was awesome. Very good, I like the art on the sides and top

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Take about 5 dozen eggs, start putting them in a bowl. Mix the FUCK out of them and what do you get? PENIS!
Ooh yeah shit just got real!
-Egoraptor [link]
~Acheronscrow:iconAcheronscrow: Jun 12, 2008, 11:26:44 PM
Thank you for viewing, glad you enjoyed :)

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"If a man had wings and bore black feathers, few of them would be clever enough to be crows."
--Henry Ward Beecher
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